THR Feedback - Individual Blog Progress

Hi Angelie
Your blog is coming along nicely and there are many things you're doing really well - your diary types of entry are interesting and informative and you have developed a sense of progress and clear reflection over the weeks by consistently posting. Having said that, I'll focus on the things you need to work on but bear in mind this is one of the best blogs so far.

You need to do some general housekeeping such as working on your layout to produce a list of links to sites and resources you have found inspirational. This has been done well be MIKE C. You need to make your responses and reflections on teacher feedback more evident. You need to link where you are posting on the grp blog with your indiv blog - so if you post on grp or if there is a post on grp, make sure you have a corresponding or related post in your individual blog and vice versa.
Also, make sure everything you post is clear in it's purpose - WHY is a particular item on your blog eg. posting youtube videos - labelled? What For? Response? Reflection? Learning?
Otherwise, well done

MRS T