THR Feedback - Individual Blog Progress

Hi Angelie
Your blog is coming along nicely and there are many things you're doing really well - your diary types of entry are interesting and informative and you have developed a sense of progress and clear reflection over the weeks by consistently posting. Having said that, I'll focus on the things you need to work on but bear in mind this is one of the best blogs so far.

You need to do some general housekeeping such as working on your layout to produce a list of links to sites and resources you have found inspirational. This has been done well be MIKE C. You need to make your responses and reflections on teacher feedback more evident. You need to link where you are posting on the grp blog with your indiv blog - so if you post on grp or if there is a post on grp, make sure you have a corresponding or related post in your individual blog and vice versa.
Also, make sure everything you post is clear in it's purpose - WHY is a particular item on your blog eg. posting youtube videos - labelled? What For? Response? Reflection? Learning?
Otherwise, well done

MRS T

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super progress evidenced on this blog; high quality research, planning and reflections so far. well done.

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interesting reflections here angelie

Wednesday's Feedback...

Firstly, sorry for the slight delay in doing this! I had planned on doing it yesterday, but then I had some crazy food poisoning type illness so when I got back from the Economics conference I just went to sleep... Anyway...

I was quite pleased that on the whole, people liked our comic book/superhero themed idea. I'm also glad that people brought up some ideas and thoughts that we may not have otherwise thought of.
The points raised about having a black indie artist were very interesting I thought, especially as I'd not really thought about that aspect of things before.
In some ways, I think it could be really interesting and different to have a black indie singer. It plays on the conventions and could be something to make our music video a bit different. However, if we were to do this, other issues could be raised. For example, which actress would play Supergirl... originally, we had proposed to have either a black or asian girl play Supergirl. But I now realise that this wouldn't make sense if we are targeting a predominantly white audience. I feel that essentially, the best way would be to have some sort of equality with the casting of the actors. But if we were to have a white hero helping out a black victim, there would be political correctness implications for that too. In which case, I think it would make the most sense to have Jennifer playing Supergirl (since that character really suits her personality) and Jazmin playing Ava.

Tomorrow we're having a group meeting. There we intend to discuss actors, style, location etc. I'm hoping it'll be a success! :D

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I know you're posting mainly to the group blog at the moment Angelie, but make sure you include some running commentary on this blog about the group project, your own thoughts about the idea etc.

analysis of some music videos using the framework we've done in class would be useful too when you get the chance

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super work so far angelie, great ideas!

love your background too but you seem to have lost some navigational ability - can you sort it??